Scientific Feature C/C

Student Sample #1 and #6

The author picked a very interesting topic as it is more of an uncommon topic and yet its ethical component is very interesting. I really enjoyed the development of the topic as the paper progressed. Each paragraph smoothly transitions into the next. The paragraphs were focused, which helped the audience keep interest. At the same time though, none of the information was random, but all related back to the topic and investigated further into fining. At the same time though, the introduction and first few paragraphs poorly introduced the topic and i didn't understand full what was going on until i was a few paragraphs in. It is clear a lot of research went into this paper and the evidence is strongly supported.

Comparatively,  I really enjoyed sample #6 because of its focus and organization. The essay successfully introduces the subject of electrical vehicles and makes the topic interesting and entertaining. I really liked the subsections into the different sections because it allowed for catigorical organization where the topics were well focused without interference. The topic also looks to be broad yet the specifics are well investigated. There are also implications discussed, but I think the author could have gone further there. I will integrate the idea of subtitles in my paper to organize the many ideas I want to discuss.